perfection, flawlessly she is
everything I want. she smiles
and my world glows in beams
of golden light. her hand rests
upon me and it's ecstasy. her
lips touch my neck, i'm blind
with pleasure, i spasm and
push to bury mysel within
her.
her breath on her saliva
freezes my spine. i am
hers and there is no other
way. she is my life, my everything.
2, Pulls out all the erotic-poem cliches (I think the word 'ecstasy' should be permanently retired from written English) and does nothing new.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good content but there has got to be a better way of saying. So maybe rework the words a bit.