(o) Your Silence! Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(o) Your Silence!

Rating: 3.2


Just one of your glance made me so restless
Your silence has now made me a living corpse

Your shadow has destroyed the peace of my heart
You have broken it like one smashes a rock

You embraced and then turned a cold shoulder
You have turned a burning fire into ashes

That cold heart has covered my heart with a shroud
Why did he do it? ....the secret remains buried in his heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 11 January 2007

The secret lays in his heart, , , , , , , , , , , nice ending to a great write

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 January 2007

GRIPPING PIECE OF WORK, MY DEAR...DARTING LANGUAGE...IMPACTING....YOU NEVER STOP IMPRESSING ME, T.O..... fjr

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