O' Moon Tell Me.... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

O' Moon Tell Me....

Rating: 4.9


O' Full moon tell me
The secret of your growing and shortening
And appearing at night time?

Moon Said; I am shy to face my love
in bright and thousand eye lights
I grow when my lover is happy with me
And I become weak and start shrinking
When my lover is upset and this happens
Quite frequently and it increases our love
And the urge to meet again increases respect.

Monday, February 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,philosophy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 23 February 2016

A lovely reasoning behind moon's waxing and waning! Enjoyed the poem!

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Abhilasha Bhatt 24 February 2016

This poem makes the moon an inspiration to live a happy life with just love....Amazing poem....loved it....thank you for sharing sir :)

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T Rajan Evol 27 February 2016

O Moon let all of us enjoy the poem by Asim.....Lovely poem on love, Thanks for sharing....10

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Kelly Kurt 22 February 2016

A lovely anthropomorphizing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 February 2016

Superb logic. It may impress even the moon. Thanks for sharing.10 +

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Rakesh Shah 20 July 2020

Nice conversation with moon. Nature delights.

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2018

THANKS TO ONE AND ALL FOR INVALUABLE COMMENTS.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2016

Trying to understand nature. Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 February 2016

Its beautiful how you have found a connection between moon and love. Moon has a beauty n mystery that only love can match. Loved it.

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 February 2016

Wonderfully though man, Great write again.

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