Now Do You See Who I Am Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

Now Do You See Who I Am

Rating: 5.0


I am a grain of sand
ready to be a piece glass
I want to make myself
transparent so that
everyone could see me
I want to have no walls
and no barriers
I want to treat everyone
the same with no
preferential treatment
given to anybody
Now do you see who I am
I am a man who tries to be good

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 14 May 2006

I can see through you Cokbod, you're just a softy and a lovable being, and can't help being good. Good poem too. Love Ernestine XXX

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Aisha Sherazi 13 May 2006

I like the metaphor here, it is very well done. I pray we can all be the best we can be, we can't be better than that. Peace, Aisha

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Lydia Francese 13 May 2006

Don't you wish everyone was like that! This is heartfelt with emotion. A 10. -Lydia

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Patricia Gale 13 May 2006

Thank you for sharing such a heart felt piece. Patricia Gale

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