Notes Poem by Suki Nakamura

Notes

Rating: 5.0


This note is to let you know you're on my mind.
I miss you and hope you're OK.

Jim


my mind knows that you're okay
but it says, the note shall let you know

about some questions like: what time is it
that the mind empties itself of all its longings

and then i shall tell you, please be there
before this thing gets filled

with air, and then it floats and like a balloon
on extreme heat, it shall finally burst but you can never hear it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dream Catcher 23 June 2009

I cant really understand the deep emotions but i find this really really cute...

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