Not Just The Wine Poem by Ayi Escalona
Not Just The Wine
my longing eyes are deeply staring
at the lying empty bottles of wine
and not so far away, is a misty glass
in it, is a chunk of haply floating diamond
melting fast, against the buoyancy
of the unfriendly and acidic liquid
not far away too, is a virtual riverbed
that extends between my drying throats
down to the provocative and tempting glass
gulp! gulp! in every lump of fluid that comes
is a commotion to my system
what had happened ….and look!
there are stars produced in the air
but only my weary eyes could see,
ohhh… did the skies came close?
i could only wonder
or the wine drifted close to my heart
washing away sticky painful thoughts
but the glass is empty now
the space is void of hope
but the dawning sun
caused my optimism to grow
when the silver curtain breaks…..
she came running with open arms
please...please.... please
don’t wake me
yes….
I’m still dreaming
wait..dont wake me..naa pa bay tuba? ..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....murag pantinig...aw lampinig diay...tagay pa, , hasta malipong..maynoon...musalom na sa sugong kay kaingon ug naay giandam nga tughong..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
'there are stars produced in the air' this i think is the most interesting line here... really poetic!
wonderful poem shared here...nice wordings and flow...cute ending! ! !
I love to drink wine and really hate to wake up during a great dream.Really can relate.Pizza and wine really gets me started.
Very Good Write... Good Descriptive Words, Good Visual of a Guy with a Hangover... We kinda have the same take on the topic... check out my poem: 'Red Sparkling Wine' ... (told you it was similar - smile) ... MoonBee
when the silver curtain breaks….. she came running with open arms these lines have life. beautiful. shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/30/2024 7:24:36 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Sweet poem with cute ending,10++