+noetic Kiss +++ Poem by Marieta Maglas

+noetic Kiss +++

Rating: 4.9


If you could love me
Even for one second,
You would understand
The tale my thoughts could tell you...
You would understand
Why the dreams would never be
Reproduced by the delusions,
Those never-ending dreams.
By using some lost pieces of the broken stars,
We could recreate a new amphora
Of light in our souls,
And we could swallow
The blue infinite,
Just you and me and our thrill,
That thrill being
Like a butterfly with trembling wings
On the cherry blossom petals of a flower,
A butterfly swirling in the breeze
With its untouched sensations
Within its untouched world,
Or like a noetic kiss in our sleep.

Copyright © ® Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, July 15, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2009

If you could love me even for one second you would understand how much would hurt this waiting You would understand why dreams would never be really reproduced by delusions …yes dear it is hundred percent correct why dreams may not turn true.. it is so lovely write and demands kudos from mefor the brillaint wriote....10 read mine all dreams not come true...mary to marry... love at first sight

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Irenio Bero 23 September 2009

Hi dear Marieta. i love the way you write your poems. its intringuing and very logical. mature lines and it really expresses great thoughts and ideas. i just wish some dreams could become realities instead of vanities carried by the wings of dillision. great poem darling.

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Sergio Bruno 26 September 2009

on a different type of kiss..loved reading the poem...........

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Philip Winchester 29 September 2009

Poetic Memories of this Kiss will stay with me a while I hope. Love can and does last I hope a lifetime, but that kiss I am afraid may only have a limited shelf life.Nice Poem, I like your style. Philip

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

A theme treated both noetically and romantically, and with good imagery

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John Knight 08 February 2010

Hi Mari - A beautiful poem from your beautiful Heart. A Neotic Kiss in our dreams is always perfect - it feels perfect - it tastes perfect and the emotional effect is perfect - it is so so much better than a mere physical kiss. 'Dreams are never really reproduced by delusions'. When we reach out to someone 'neotetically' it only takes one second of love (V 1) . V 3 We would begin to understand the difference between metaphysical love and love in 'real space and time'. V 5 & 6 The 'infinite blue amphora recreated from the lost peices of broken stars' is awesome 'Just you and me and our thrill'. V 8 This is so so experiential Mari and absolutely describes the infinite thrill of 'Dream Love'. Metaphorically Butterlfy wings - Cherry blossom petals - untoched sensations' admit it Mari - you have been there - 'Like a Neotic kiss in our sleep'. Thank you for sharing the object of your Dream Love must be a perfect Dream Lover. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.

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Akram Awadat 12 January 2010

fantastic poem, thanks for sharing

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Rahul Aithal 09 December 2009

ike a butterfly with trembling wings on the cherry blossom petals swirling in the breeze with their untouched sensations, within their untouched world.... Beautiful..

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Eyan Desir 05 December 2009

Yes nice wording fine poetic lines well crafted

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Mari Velazco 04 November 2009

aww that is so cute and adorablke like margaret said the diction was vividly wonderful keep up the great work

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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