No Love, No Peace Poem by HaZeM PaKKaR

No Love, No Peace



I live on Plato..
No pepsi, No donuts..

I live on Neptune..
No pizza, No sushi..

I live on Uranus..
No water, No soap..

I live on Saturn..
No cars, No trains..

I live on Jupiter..
No music, No movies..

I live on Mars..
No cigarettes, No coffee..

I live on Venus..
No girls, No butterflies..

I live on Mercury..
No cats, No dogs..

I live on Earth..
No LOVE, No PEACE..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Merna Ibrahim 27 August 2009

Nice presentation to the planets! ! ....and Yes, there's neither peace nor love on earth..but we can make them both exist...10++

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I live on Earth.. No LOVE, No PEACE.. ---> great I confirm now your style of writing is unique... nice!

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Milena Veleva 18 August 2009

Enjoed your fresh and original style of writing! Thank you very much.

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ha ha! I didn't know where you were going with this, but I love the ending! Great job!

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