Nit-Pick Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Nit-Pick

Rating: 5.0


Nice kitchen, the tiler says twice,
after finishing his task.

Nice what? I ask.

Not that I'm bitchin',
but not a kitchen, I think,
without stove, water and sink.

Thursday, September 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: kitchen,renewed hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
3.Sept.20. I'm having it renovated
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 03 September 2020

not a kitchen, I think, without stove, water and sink.

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Soran M. H 03 September 2020

congratulation for renovated, but at the same time you haven't missed out this opportunity for poetry inspiration, well done... it goes on my fav list too

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Soran M. H 03 September 2020

in this lovely poem we can reach the authentic and origin meaning of things, or digging deep until we reach the source and soul of a true meaning, but may be when the tiler said it is Nice, he was meaning only the decoration, but the poet is right the kitchen without water doesn't mean any thing. it deserves a top mark 10++

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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