Nija Paain Dinatie(A Poem In Odia Language) Poem by Bharati Nayak

Nija Paain Dinatie(A Poem In Odia Language)

Rating: 5.0

Mo jibanara dina, masa, barsa
Bhasi jae, biti jae
Kie rakhe taa'ra hisaba, nikasa?

E sabu mora dhana
Mu baanti diie akunthare
Jahara jete loda
Nei jaa
Matra chhadi jaa
Dinatie
Mote mo paakhare

Ei dinati
Mu mote samarpibi
Mora bhaya bhranti
Glani, dwidha, dwanda dwibidha
Tejibi mu aaji
Aaji dinati
Nije nijaku samarpibi

Nijaku arpibi
Sneha, prema, raga, anuraga
Nija paase kholidebi
Jete bhasa byakta abyakta

Nijaku sajeibi
Mo sangeeta, mo kabitare
Phularu renu aani
Mu aankibi
Chandanara tika, mo nija mathare
Prajapati denara rangare
Mo kesa basa sajaibi
Koili thu mu aaji mo bhasa sikhibi

Meghaku maagibi kajala
Mo aakhira susama pain
Aakasu aanibi jala
Nijaku dhoi deba pain
Samudraku maagibi
Gabhirata
Mo bhasa kabita pain

Ei dinati kintu
Mu kebala
Mu hoi rahibi
Nathiba tahni
labamatra
Chhalana o prabanchana
Na thiba taihn
Mithya aba andhakar
Kebala aaloka madhye
Udbhasita heba mo antara
Ei dinati
Kebala mu mote samarpibi
Ei dinati
Heba bodhe
mora sesha dina aba sesha ratri

Wednesday, June 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my poem in Odia language.The topic means-A Day for myself.I would be so glad if Odia knowing poets give their views.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 07 November 2023

Bharati's English translation is a very fine poem; hopefully the Odia original is also, but, ALAS, I do not read, write, OR speak Odia. : ( bri

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2023

If this reads as well as your English translation (also on PH, A Day For Myself) I give 5 stars and send to my favorites. My Odia is 'rusty'. ;) bri

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 November 2022

A fantastic Odia poem. Loved it. Full marks dear poetess for this wonderful poem.

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Queeny Gona 30 June 2016

Mam, we need the translation!

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Bharati Nayak 30 June 2016

I am so happy to get your comments dear Queeny.We poets always need readers like you for reading and appreciating poems.

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Sayeed Abubakar 29 June 2016

If I understood your language, Didi, I would comment here. Please tell us its theme in English.

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Bharati Nayak 29 June 2016

Thank you Sayeed for showing your interest to know my poem.I am trying for a translation.

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