Never You Poem by Vallerie Lobell

Never You

Rating: 5.0


I will float away on westward wind,
Leaving all memories behind,
The renewal of a soul rendered fustian,
To a better place and time,

I know it's all within myself,
I'll dig deeper every day,
The frigid place to melt,
As the warm winds gently sway,

I'll find the girl that I once was,
And hold her tight when I do,
My slate will then be wiped clean because,
You never existed, there was never you,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 14 October 2009

Starting on a clean slate Vallerie? i think wind is blowing strong out there...westwards! nice write...the wind of strong will blows off the pain...10

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Jolanta Gradowicz 08 October 2006

I am very happy to meet you, Vallerie. Your poems are really amazing. Jolanta

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Diane Violet 30 September 2006

Love this poem more than I can say. Great write. All the best, Diane

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Brian Dorn 23 September 2006

Great ending to a great poem, Vallerie! Brian

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Ashish R 23 September 2006

Theres a nice feel about your poem.Liked it. Ashish

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