Never Give Up Poem by Lyn Paul

Never Give Up

Rating: 5.0


When
You have given your all
To the ones you love
Put first their wants
Stayed for them

Hugs
Smiles
Love
You've given them all

Now
They have let go
Life's opportunities are open
They've closed the door
The force was stronger

So
Just wait
Leave the door open
Just HOPE

.....

Never give up on those
Those who gave you everything





Copyright Reserved January 26th 2016
Lyn Paul

Tuesday, January 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 January 2016

In love everything is pleasing and life's opportunities open in such case. This is very interesting poem shared on really.10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 January 2016

An inspirational poem with positive approach to life by hoping for the best in even despairing situations. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Tony Karas 26 January 2016

Never give up. great advice. Nice work.

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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

Highly relatable, focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 February 2016

The force was stronger! But, hope lies ahead. Nice piece of work.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 February 2016

Patience to stay is a key of everything. I enjoyed with it. Thank you for sharing.

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Sandra Feldman 02 February 2016

Hope is the last thing you should lose. It's what was left in Pandora's box when all the ills for the world escaped. Hope is precisely what you never give up, as this poem so well expresses and the wise Greek mythology knew. You are a gifted poet with a gifted heart.

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Kelly Kurt 26 January 2016

A difficult decision. You have poured your heart, your life, your essence into someone and they quit. No need to stop caring, but when do you need to let go for your own good and give that love to others who deserve it?

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