Never Give Up Poem by Esther low

Never Give Up

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No matter how hard i try,
no matter how much effort i put in,
in return it was nothing at all.
When time goes by,
i start to get tired,
i wish time would have stopped by now,
everything would have come to an ending,
but,
it just never stop.
Time went on and on,
I was trying to caught up,
with the time,
it was so hard,
trying to get back what i suppose to have.
It was so complicated,
but i try.
The damage was so badly done,
i want to do something with it,
but,
i have limited ability.
I was standing alone there,
I try to shout, cry, scream,
but no one hear me,
because i was left alone there (stupid) .
So i shut up,
Waiting for something to happened.
I kept walking and walking,
trying to find the way out,
but i guess i can't.
Sometime there is 1 or 2 passby,
but awhile later,
they will disappear from here.
Passby ask me,
why why don't you just give up?
A reply from me,
Because..... i walked so far,
i don't want to give up so fast. =)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
nomad omnia 08 September 2009

...you are never stupid, never beaten, so never give up. A good write, Esther. N

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