No poems are
As deeply felt
As those
Produced
By loss
Of One
You love.
Unfortunately,
That's a hurt
That really
Never heals
No matter
What you do!
A wound that
In deep silence
Bleeds.
The loss of a loved one creates a void and that void will never be filled up no matter how much time elapsed.
A powerful and moving poem that deeply expresses the agony of those who were left behind. So hard not to remember the pains brought about by the loss of a loved one.
"A wound that /in deep silence// bleeds" my heart bleeds too. Loved the emotive expression..
Thank you all o much for your wonderful and deeply understanding comments. They do bring consolation.
A great sadness this poems causes each time I read, but this is the very truth so honestly told. The concluding three lines says it all. A fascinating poem that stirs and touched my heart, dearest Sandra.5 Stars Top score!
' A wound that in deep silence bleeds', beautiful lines from a great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your beautifully written, stirring poem well expresses feeling of grief and loss, on this day of remembrance.