Reed plants have grown,
Grown are the plans here,
Near this pond they think,
An autumn day has come.
Inside the pond we see
Fresh breeze swings more,
Lotus flowers gently smile,
White grass flowers giggle.
Water is covered by leaves,
Nature has given near joy,
Humming beauty is summing,
Day's gentle glaze is calm.
White grass flowers we see,
Reed plants wear crowns,
Brightness is adored well,
Wild-date plants do meeting.
Natural happening is felt,
Before cyclone time is calm,
An autumn day declares freedom.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,09 October 2018. All rights reserved.
Date & Time: 10/9/2018 9: 24: 00 PM Member: Douglas Scotney Comment: Photo did come through KM. Nice poem though, but how does humming beauty sum?
A lovely imaginative write. It brings out the beauty and wonders of nature. Well crafted write.10+++
Kumarmani, such a lovely poem....................10+++++++++++++++
Autumn plays near pond with marvellous appearance. Autumn sings and motivates us. The beauty of autumn is painted by your artistic mind here.
Spirituality and nature, two of the more recurring themes, what a wonderful, imaginative write this! And with an equally beautiful picture accompanying.
A moment of pause and a moment of clarity. This verse reminds us what perfect stillness, clam, is. A great work, Kumarmani.
Superb poem nicely backed by a wonderful picture. A picture says thousand words and your poem speaks volumes.10+
There was a similar poem of yours I have read last week about reeds; and thanks to it, I was able to finally notice the reeds by a brook, where it meets the sea: a place I regularly go; but, strange enough, I never new they were there! But, your poem and this one, made me look at them and think about your poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great charm of nature during autumn deftly transported into this amazing poem. Truly a treat to nature lovers. Thanks for sharing it, Kumarmani ji.