Naomi Poem by Louise JeanMarie

Naomi



Light of my life yes its you
Your hugs and kisses fill me with joy
To hear you laugh is like a sun ray through the clouds
The heat of your sweet smelling breath when your face is next to mine
Sometimes I forget how much you depend on me to show you the way.
When you turn towards me to make sure its OK.
I will cherish the wonder that you are to see your light shine brighter making sure it never dims.
My beautiful little star.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James S Newcomb Lang 18 December 2009

Lovely. My girlfriends name is Naomi also, so I read it to her and she agrees with me that it's a lovely poem. I disagree with your previous commenter, as I do believe that people want to read love poems. Romance isn't dead.

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Luisa Sanchez 13 August 2009

Your a gud writer.......just one critisism.......maybe don't write to much about love it will make the reader want to stop reading your poems

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