Nameless Beauty Poem by bianca felix

Nameless Beauty

Rating: 5.0


I saw you in the halls today,

a fleeting moment

in which my heart fluttered.

Black plastic glasses,

and shy eyes averted to the floor

give you the awkward stance

of being in the wrong body.

Hair so short,

one might have mistaken you

for a boy at a first glance.

With hair that short,

could you possibly be

playing for my team?

I don't normally moon

over girls I don't know,

but I can't seem to

get you out of my head.

Yet, I do not even know your name.

I do not know your grade,

your age, or anything about you.

But you are so beautiful to me,

and I don't think you know

how beautiful you really are.

My nameless beauty,

lift up your head and smile,

for the heavens shine

their light upon you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Good poem. Loved reading

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Amber S 12 August 2011

my favorite poem of yours :) keep writing hun :) -Amber

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Josh Schultz 26 April 2010

Your best poem out of the 3, it shows a lot of expression, and although it didnt rhyme, you made it in such a style where it wasnt just a paragrapph...I like it keep writing

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Neil Kennovin 26 April 2010

Very interesting. The style is very cool, and the subject matter is different.

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Terence George Craddock 26 April 2010

Beautiful honest expression and style. I enjoyed the read. I still remember the hallways: -)

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