Rules Poem by bianca felix
Rules
Let me climb into your lap
And kiss your eyes closed
Because I love the way they shine
And I don't want them looking
When I follow your rules
And you break mine.
Monday, April 26, 2010
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Neil Kennovin
26 April 2010
Very good, kinda short but that's okay. The fourth line is a great one, but it seems kinda out of place.
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5/2/2024 9:30:10 PM # 1.0.0.1119
i think maybe a bit too short, but I still did really like the poem