(n) 2 (Ballad) The Mermaid (Part Ii) Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(n) 2 (Ballad) The Mermaid (Part Ii)

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Quiver of a smile touched her face
She spoke with her emerald green eyes
He was hit by a sudden flash as she gazed
Suddenly comprehending that she was a mermaid in disguise

In a swift moment, clouds besieged the sky
Bolts of thunder and fierce winds started to blow
As they looked up, angry rain greeted them out to defy
The lightning gave them a strange eerie glow

He took her hand and they started to run
Towards some shelter where they could get an escape
A new chapter unfolding, a new turn of events had begun
He turned towards her and saw that her body was all scraped

He devoured her with his eyes from head to toe
Her tumbling black hair, her limpid eyes
Her heaving breasts, her glistening silvery white skin aglow
Her wonderfully arched back, her creamy thighs

She looked at him in wonder, her first brush with a man
A sudden wave of longing coursed through her veins
Broad muscular chest and lean torso with a bronzed tan
Close proximity letting their pheromones reign

He touched her on the arms where she had got bruised
Dont worry, I will take you home and put a balm
Tracing his hands on her body, her cheeks getting suffused
And we shall get some clothes for this beautiful ma'am

They looked out and saw that the storm had passed
The sky had become red, the time nearing five
A tinge of remembrance of her previous life got overcast
on her face, was this a rebirth? Or was it an end of a life?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 03 September 2006

Kept me reading throughout, ummm what next? Love duncan X

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 August 2006

T. O. > This is food work, young lady...Quite impressive...Opening line tells you from the start that you are in for a sterling read...And thats exactly what you delivered! Part 3...Where art thee? ! ''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Kelly Allen Vinal 28 August 2006

Read them both - excellent series - can't wait for the next one!

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