Mysterious Depth Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Thanks a lot dear Ahmed for your great opinion about me....am I really so...I am just an ordinary common woman, a grand-mother, old enough, just trying out with the once little learnt English.. some forty years ago...your poem above is wonderful giving a scenic picture...congratulations....thanks again

great poem and a great title too...you are right, those peoples' life is always in danger.....I appreciate your appreciation to the poets on poemhunter....well done

I would edit the S from feels to feel. Give's it a better flow.