My Utopia Poem by Phil Soar

My Utopia

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I found a sweet utopia that led my mind astray
Swathed in relaxation, it had really made my day
But looking for a place to rest, to let my mind reflect
I realised that this was somewhere I should just respect

No other place quite matched the stillness of this open space
I stood awhile and let the atmosphere dwell on my face
It gave my heart a welcome lift and raised my spirits high
The grass so tall and wistful, as it reached up for the sky

I memorised this magic space, and stored it in my brain
Knowing I would soon be searching out the site again
It showed me what it is, to hold a wonder in your hand
To witness how we live in such a green and pleasant land

Thursday, July 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alexander Rues 16 July 2015

with only a few word dedicated to the physical description of the space The grass so tall and wistful... I could still imagine a vivid picture in my mind as your utopia became mine- thanks! !

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