My Third Senryu Poem by David Taylor

My Third Senryu

Rating: 5.0


With a third stabbing
Hi'Ku lay bleeding near dead
still counting her breath.

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x... x... 10 October 2007

Well if one must go like this, at least it will be after reading this....Stupid me, I haven't a clue what a Senryu is but than neither can I do a Haikus, at least knowing that it might be one. Dark but appealing, different from you..but, I like it. love, mm.xo

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Ernestine Northover 10 October 2007

Well, that's one way of putting it! ! ! How many other Haikus have to fall before you run out of Senryus? Very good one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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