My Soul Poem by Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam

My Soul

Rating: 5.0


I can't look things in peace,
Cause, I let it to shatter in piece,
Times are, when all sounded too good,
Rhymes now, sounds too old.

I want things to burgeon out from soul,
Can't ring a reel, out to roll,
Real are my emotions,
Feel, not let it to attritions.

Hear, my soul weakens everyday,
Never haul it to dooms day,
See not my actions,
Peek to know my right directions.

Patience is the key to know me,
Passion for everything, leads me,
Be known, to be with you everywhere,
Being to frown, takes me nowhere.

Peerless as seen, my brother,
Cheerless and keen to bother,
Forgot to please me, my mother,
Regrets to release the tether.

Yearn to see myself leap, my aunt,
Churn herself and reap a chant,
Lacks the capacity to rant,
Hacks the veracity, cause am a runt.

Friends! nice to have one,
Tends to price me none,
Eager, not miss me to criticize,
Rather bless them a praise.

Agriculture, I chosen as lamebrain,
Future fasten as fame drain,
Lookout to search, seldom for a way,
Set out to reach kingdom faraway.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 25 October 2008

Poem on a soul...poem of a soul...impressive wordings, Vignesh...have done good justice to the idea behind this write...10

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Kind request to those who read this- If you people find any fault in this kindly notify me...Cause am not so good in identifing my errors...Just wrote what i feel Thank you Vignesh

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Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam

Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam

Coimbatore, Tamilnadu, India
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