My Shoes, Our House Poem by Kevin Patrick

My Shoes, Our House

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You cannot complete me
For I complete myself
Like a pair of feet
these shoes alone keep me whole
yet, you can add to me
dimensions of my foundation
like additions to a house
the sun room of my loves lost soul


No one can
complete your mind
but someone
can enlarge your heart

Monday, November 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: thought
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 April 2023

A beautiful thought so true. Very enlightening and well expressed poem.

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Anjandev Roy 21 April 2023

This is simply brilliant piece.....thanks for sharing....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2020

Wonderful! The last stanza provides a precious message! Appreciated.

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