My Path Poem by donavan avril

My Path



as i walk the lonely path call life
am being hit with many pot holes called enemies,
who wants to tear me apart.
my life is a struggle,
with my past hitting me very hard,
making my future unclear to see through.
with no one to help me explain,
all i no am walking this lonely path.
with the dawn slowly fading,
slowly my future drift away.
support was never in the picture
especially in the family nor my friends.
everything i have achieve is due to streets smart
and learning from people mistakes.
friend came along due to money and my success
but when the trouble shift in
i was left alone to suffer,
down to the curve i had no friends.
i am standing in a four entries road
wondering where is north.
need a fresh start on this lonely
but until i haven't make up my mind
i am walking a lonely path call life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vanessa Atille 16 May 2013

I believe that life is base upon the choices that we make, because the strange thing about life is that we definitely have to make choices everyday that we are alive. but when life gets hard, never give up, because u never know, there is always somebody out there, in some part of the world that has life more difficult than you, everything happens for a reason. Like a wise man once told me every disappointment is a blessing and that life is one big road with lots of signs, you have to make up your mind to face reality all the time. So be appreciative, live your life for today and don't worry about tomorrow for tomorrow has its own troubles. Everyday that you live to see, thank the CREATOR of the heavens and earth, that you are alive and well because u never know if today or tomorrow might be your last, so in spite of whatever problems you are going through, nothing last forever, so enjoy life as much as you can whiles u are still living.

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