My Past Poem by amanda chavez

My Past

Rating: 4.5


I knew this guy,
Who always made me cry,
I will never forget the things he said,
In my dreams and real life,
He made me suffer,
All day and all night,
I thought I wuold never see the light,
I will never forget the things he did,
And the way he ruind my life,
I only trust one person,
I told him most of my secrets,
There is only one, but only one,
I swore not to tell,
I guess it wont be hidden for long,
I am on a spell,
I hope he will soon ROT IN HELL! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S Ae 16 April 2009

Sad, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , oh so sad!

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Rani Turton 12 June 2008

From the pathos and hurt in the beginning, the fighting spirit and courage come sailing out at the end. Good for you, Amanda!

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