My Moon Poem by kayla laflex

My Moon

Rating: 4.3


When you look at the moon on a cloudless night, you see the light that it gives. It's so clear and bright and makes you wonder what'll happen in your life. Sometimes you see the moon in people you know. The light that's within radiates from the soul. It shines in everything they do and you realize that their love is true. It can't be taken away and it can never fade.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cody Wisneski 26 August 2008

You have a light Kayla. A light that I want you to shine brighter with every passing day. I want you to shine in life ok? Be who you want and do what you want and say what you want and love what you want. Just shine, and shine bright.

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 August 2008

The title is alienated from the poem and that is a big thing. I cannot recommend this poem. GW62

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 August 2008

...amazing similitude...fine poem.......10/10

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