My Mind Poem by Mindless minds

My Mind

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My mind;
having no good understanding
nor a high mental capacity, serves no purpose,
meaning, or direction, in simplicity it’s mindless.

my mind;
unlike a computer having the ability to processes knowledge
has no knowledge it is obsolete,
in simplicity it is mindless.

however my mindless mind
having a complete misunderstanding of the world
and how it revolves and involves
knows this: my love for you is like the love the moon
has for the ocean tides. Controlling and never ceasing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trinity K 19 October 2008

Ghalib said.' leave heart and mind alone and seperated sometimes.'

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S... Che 17 October 2008

nice poem, very well written

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Ency Bearis 15 October 2008

so you are an emptiness but your love is sacred and nowhere to be stopped as it is in bloom? ...is that the way it implies? ...keep on writing..need to see more.. Ency Bearis

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