My Love Poem by Elvis Fout

My Love



Our love is like a golden ring
Wrapped around our finger.
Our love is like a shining star
Bright our future.

Love is blind
But with you is eyed.
Love is bitter
But with you is sweet.

Yes love is hell
But with you is heaven.
Love is worst than mantle
But with you is like a beautiful crust.

Love is tough
But with you is easy.
Love is stressful
But with you is capable.

Love is dirty
But with you is clear.
Love is death
But with you is life.

Love is war
But with you is peace.
Love is violent
But with you is peace.

Love is poverty
But with you is wealth.
Love is bad
But with you is good.

Love is nothing
But with you is everything.
Love is a blinking moon
But with you is a shining sun.

I am the young
And you are the wrestles.
I am the bold
And you are the beautiful.

Love is nothing
But with you is everything.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asif Andalib 04 December 2012

Good write but there are a few typographical errors. The first stanza should be Our love is like a golden ring Wrapped around our finger. Our love is like a shining star Bright our future. and Love is though should be Love is tough

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