My Love.. Poem by Devontae' Rankin

My Love..

Rating: 5.0


i love youh in every way,

i love you when your feelings for meh fade away.

i need you when you need me,

i need you more then a heart needs a beat.

this is more then love,

something i cant describe.

Dont put your feelings for me away,

dont let them hide.

Because for a long time,

i have felt like this inside..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anoooog El-shaer 25 July 2011

Good Job! Its a Great poem Keep writing :)

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Romeo Della Valle 24 July 2011

I am very sure these lovely words don't come out from barren lips but from the bottom of your heart! Very impressive and poignant! Keep inspiring the World with your great talented works! Love and Peace for always! 10+++ Romeo from New York! ...

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Deja Rupp 16 July 2010

Wow this is really good(: its a little bit sad too Good job!

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Antonio Liao 16 July 2010

as you look up the sky....clouds curtain your eyes......a poem can be best describe in this lines....wonderful you have made in the eye of a poet....Excellent One...God bless and God bless...a star ad a 10 +++++

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