My Love Poem by mariena soares

My Love

Rating: 5.0


My love is like an ocean
It goes down so deep
My love is like a rose
Whose beauty you want to keep.

My love is like a river
That will never end
My love is like a dove
With a beautiful message to send.

My love is like a song
That goes on and on forever
My love is like a prisoner
It's to you that I surrender.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Kern 01 September 2009

very well done young lady! please continue 10+++

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Bryan Alexander 27 August 2009

I liked your poem very good metaphore check out my 1st attempt at a love poem if you have time and let me know what you think

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