My Love Poem by Hollie McDaniel

My Love

Rating: 5.0


Your eyes shine so very bright
when you walk in i see the light
Your smile changes the night to day
when I'm with you
i know that your the way
to the happiness we both desire
You are my every thing
You set my world on fire
the happiness I've been feeling
it's all because of you
Your the person I've been needing
this is from my point of view
i know I've hurt you in the past
but that's just where it'll stay
it's not going to happen this time
it's my promise to you this day
baby you're my one and only
I promise this to you too
I'll never stray from your side
because baby i love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 14 August 2009

I promise this to you too I'll never stray from your side because baby i love you yea love somthing what you said about and there are good and bad days.. pleasure and worries too..but what you expressed in this poem is really a rich idea and thoughful enough..liked it 10/10

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