My Love Poem by Jodilee Duke

My Love

Rating: 5.0


O' how I am here, just waiting to be with
just waiting to feel my loves lift.
My thoughts - breaking down
My heart- feeling so blue
O' how I am here, just waiting to be with you
just to feel the love that's true.
My eyes- blank not seeing you
My ears- deaf without your song
O' how I am here, just wanting to feel you near
just need to have you here.
Land of love!
Hands that share!
Out with what's not,
and in with the what is.
For you is why I am!
You give me my thoughts,
you pump my blood,
you give my eyes sight,
and my ears heaven each night.
For you is why I am!

My Love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mitta Xinindlu 20 July 2008

I can imagine someone perfoming it...and the way it's supposed to sound at the end, 'my love'. keep writing

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V Ramkissoon 06 July 2008

aww, i totally love this poem ;) full of love and meaning indeed :) sweet! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Noha Ramzy 28 April 2008

Hi Jodilee, Loved this poem a lot, its really full of love and passion, I hope you get to know that it has been felt so deep and been considerd. I hope you write more for I am one of your fans. Thanks Babe Lu N.R

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