Grudge Poem by Jodilee Duke

Grudge

Rating: 5.0


You are not so true
you hold what's not
even love,
you just say
yet never do.

Sad to know that you don't know
what's true.
You live in a heart that's blue,
because you can't see past
you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rohit sapra 12 August 2008

Expressing the feelings is done very nicely in this poem.

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Leonard Lee 10 August 2008

Superbly written as always, ,

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Bethany Buhl 10 August 2008

I though you were talking to me. In this poem and even if your not it feels like you are so thanks.

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Janice Etienne 10 August 2008

WOW! ! i like this poem because i never see past myself (it's an eye opener) .

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