My Life Support Poem by Julie Smith

My Life Support



I can't breathe
You're my life support
When you're gone
My life span's cut short

Don't go away
Just for a second
I need you to stay
With me forever

When you're not around
My heart rate goes down
Baby, please save my life
And make me your wife

Wednesday, March 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,feeling,feelings,forever,heart,love,medical
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just how I feel... Feelings expressed in medical terms ;)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2017

Deep love is expressed wonderfully in this poem. Lovely diction. Thanks for sharing.

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