My Heart Poem by Lynn Marie

My Heart

Rating: 5.0


if only you could read my heart
youd see the pain inside
its not a nice place
really cold and dark

its like an empty room
no one to keep it warm
i dont know if it will last
its on its way to doom

its has a massive hole
right though the middle
i dont know how to fix it
should be filled with dryed out cole

it might as well just have one last beat
i tell you its to alone
and to dark to live
i might as well give in to defeat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
I Am Charlie 12 June 2009

and it feels so dead, doesn't it? nice flow of words. though i'd think the to in the 2nd and 3rd last is spelt too?

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