My Granny... Poem by Baidurya Mukherjee
My Granny...
This poem was first posted on my side account-chom chom
My granny lost her specs today,
And she searched for them in every way,
She searched for it here and there,
She searched for it even under her chair,
But she couldn't find it even after looking under the bed,
Because the specs were on her head!
Dear Baidurya, Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your porm. It's good, humourous and have a reflection to a story of uncle Kutchu. Saying that in your poem of 4 couplets, you 've more or less maintained the meter count in 3 of them. But in the last couplet you have violated that.. Try to shorten the line, Use 'yet' in place of 'but' at the beginning and may replace 'looking into' by 'peep below her bed'..I hope it helps. I'm giving you 7 for the effort.. write on Rajkumar
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 5:06:07 AM # 1.0.0.1119
great sweetness in your poem. Great