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My Girl Birthday

Make a wish on birthday

Make a wish and give it wings
Dreams of bright and beautiful things

Dance through all the fun filled hours
Don't forget to smell the flowers

Share some love and birthday cake
All life joys are yours to take

And when evening comes to view
Thanks your lucky stars you're you

Happy Birthday

Submitted: Thursday, March 26, 2009


Comments about this poem (My Girl Birthday by Patrick 'the pyropoet' littrell )

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  • Trevor Irwin (4/21/2010 10:39:00 AM)

    I enjoyed reading the above poem - it's witty and fun. Shouldn't it read 'thank your lucky stars' in the final lines? I noticed the poet's poem about the moon and enjoyed that too.

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