Glamorous Enigma

Rookie (13/04/1987 / Algeria)

-My FREEDOM-


my Freedom, my Freedom
you saved me
you tore my chain
you detached the knots
you released my pain
you fixed the dots
thanks! thanks!

my Freedom, my Freedom
you’re my necklace
you’re my bracelet

my Freedom, my Freedom
I feel you, I think about you
you accompany me, you’re my Angel

my Freedom, my Freedom
I like to be your slave
your slavery makes me Brave

my Freedom, my Freedom
clearly you engrave
my responsibilities
precisely you surround
my extremities
my Freedom, my Freedom
you’re my massive concept
my imperative impulse

my Freedom, my Freedom
I respire you, you inspire me

{October 10,2009}

Submitted: Monday, December 13, 2010
Edited: Monday, December 13, 2010

Do you like this poem?
5 person liked.
5 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (-My FREEDOM- by Glamorous Enigma )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patience Tloubatla (11/21/2014 11:26:00 AM)

    my freedom my freedom.....#it is a very courageouvs poem and a master piece* (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Muhammed irfan (12/20/2012 1:45:00 AM)

    my freedom my freedom
    to enjoy the life
    which god gave
    masha allah (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madina Morris (12/7/2012 11:52:00 AM)

    My freedom my freedom is an encoraging masterpiece. It rough, but bumpless. I really enjoy this read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Njuguna Peter Mnyagia (2/25/2012 9:11:00 PM)

    '...Your slavery makes me brave.'
    i love it. It's quite a masterpiece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Carney (1/22/2011 7:53:00 AM)

    Again a great write, I take this as two meanings in one poem. I like the way you Freedom is your heart and soul to give you the courage and drive to go forward. I love you anology on this. Its a great write! ! ! ! 10+ (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. The Bridal Ballad, Edgar Allan Poe
  2. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  3. If, Rudyard Kipling
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  6. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  7. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  8. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  9. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  10. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
[Hata Bildir]