My Fate Has Been Sealed.... Poem by hazem al jaber

My Fate Has Been Sealed....

Rating: 5.0


My Fate Has Been Sealed....



your love placed inside my heart...

came to me without prior notice...

owned it and got into it to burn this heart...



how pity this heart...

this heart which i hold..

pity you are, my heart from this love...

from those fires which burned you...

and changed your life, up to down...



is that your fate...?

this fate, which wrote on you...?

to be always in love..

in love with whom who don`t know how to take care of you...



who owns this rights...

to make you always in pains...

who can change this...

and who can put the end to this fate..



pity you are, my pity heart...

i know that i shall meet my fate oneday...

but i need a fate which my heart deserve...

i need a happiness...

the happiness which i seek and dream always about...



i will accept my fate for what it was...

but if this fate completed my life with you...



hazem02@yahoo.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tia Maria 28 October 2008

'but i need a fate which my heart deserve... i need a happiness... the happiness which i seek and dream always about...' Very heartfelt write which many of us can relate to...10/10

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Linda Moore 28 October 2008

True feelings to emotions of Love, sometimes one Loves more than the other or is less thoughtful.......10 very good

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Miriam Maia Padua 28 October 2008

truly amazing...wonderful words of love comes from the heart..A writer has a heart full of love enough to express these words full of emotions...a complete acceptance of feeling the love inside.. but is fate is fate....and we have to accept....10 for your piece my friend...God bless u always

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Claudia Orchard 28 October 2008

That is a beautiful poem. It sounds like it was written from the heart, which is why it deserves a 10.

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Anjali Sinha 28 October 2008

nice write. keep writing regards anju

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