A Waiting Love... Poem by hazem al jaber

A Waiting Love...

Rating: 2.9


A waiting love...



waiting you...
where are you from me?

where are you in my life...
you are the image, drawn by my eyes...
where are you from my pains...
you are the pains in my life...
where are you from poems...
you are my words and my verse...
where are you from my feelings...
you are the emotions for my world...
where are you from my thoughts...
you are the idea which drew through my heart...
where are you from my smiles...
you are the brightness to my life...
where are you from my voice...
you are the warm tone in my lonely darkness nights...
where are you from my laughs...
you are the joyful...
you are the guffaw to my soul...
where are you...
where you are...
what i am for you...
what i mean for you...
i am the one who lives inside your heart..
the one who loves you...
the one who see a world through your eyes...
i am here inside your thoughts and your fantasy...
living through your world...
breathing your passion...
and sleep just to dream about you...

i am here with my words..
here just waiting you...
and only waiting you..

by: hazem02

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Little Morning Star 20 November 2008

a great poem for one who are waiting for their true love

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Zaarah Jasmin 02 December 2008

no matter how bad thing is there will be always a better tomorrow.. good piece you have here.. i rate10

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Winnie Angel 05 January 2009

yet another superb poem abt a true love of a man................ 'I thought my love is deepest of all, i thought nobody loves more than i love my love, but u prove me wrong, ur love is true and deepest of all.....'

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Sarah May 27 January 2009

so much feelin's so much love i love it =]

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 25 April 2009

Clearly your partner will be your life, your everything and your all - no heart can refuse such a gift

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Moonbee Canady 27 October 2009

Very Nice, and Emotive... Openess of Heart, Soul Pouring Beautiful Flow of Words... Very Enjoyable Read... I Think I have a poem you would like to read... Look for ' The Look of The Hurt ' and also, ' Your Lips, Are Like An Eclipse '... and I Hope You Enjoy them as much as I enjoyed reading Yours... Poet-Pal, MoonBee

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Seema Gupta 24 September 2009

'just fantastic.....' regards

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

i am here with my words.. here just waiting you... and only waiting you.................where are you? what a passionate words? so much feeling for love.. i admire thehonesty behind it... i love it and most.....10 read mine anywhere......butterflies around.....how r u? ? ?

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Ioana Trica 14 August 2009

, , where are you from me? where are you in my life? ' I like it. It is true, honest and romantic poem. Thanks. a 10

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Intan Rianda 18 July 2009

I love this poem! you show your feels honestly

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