My Dorian Poem by Christina Ader

My Dorian

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they say, it`s penny deal
revealing cloaks of merits
and asperities of life.

look at your hands, love,
they polished, milk and honey,
and face of yours
not even touched with wrinkles,
but grim of lust glows
on story-teller lips.

`live Dorian treads on the ground.
the gaze of wild, naughty passion,
the grip I miss.

and only rain can echo Andante
that flows out of my slightly trembling heart.
Ka leaving, the time of breath-holding.
submerged dead body in the Limb,
that tears it apart.

Saturday, April 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: ideals,love and life,love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
13/05/2014
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 20 September 2015

Hunger Imagery Masks Meanings Coffee Shares intriguing imagery leaves a hunger in the soul to read to understand masked meanings behind words begs questions appreciation a coffee shares for explanations Copyright © Terence George Craddock Written in September 2015 on the 16&20.9.2015. Inspired by the poem 'My Dorian' by Christina Ader. Dedicated to the poet Christina Ader.

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Terence Craddock 19 September 2023

I wrote the poem 'Hunger Imagery Masks Meanings Coffee Shares' inspired by the poem 'My Dorian' by the poet Christina Ader and dedicated to Christina Ader.

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Christina Ader 21 September 2015

thanks for appreciation, indeed

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Terry Craddock 15 September 2015

Intriguing imagery, leaving a hunger in the soul, to read to understand masked meanings behind words; would love to share a coffee and an explanation.

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Kelly Kurt 04 April 2015

A beautiful poem, Christina. Thank you for sharing

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Christina Ader 08 April 2015

thank you for noticing

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