My Disease Poem by Toine Sheppard

My Disease



Hating the skin im in
Im filled with sin

Scared of the person underneath
That person is me

Living this life
Showing a lie

Knowing that if i die
Its because of my own pride

Wanting to be proud of my skin
Trying to get thin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jake Erkens 29 April 2009

Lovely portrayal of human beings wanting to become someone else, rejecting their body which God has given to them. They live a lie because of their skin tone, weight, or even height. Good job. This poem has a good soft flow with good word choice. Nice poem indeed :) Regards Jake

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Sapphire Santiago 15 April 2009

i liked this poem, its really good

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