My Dead Love Poem by suraj kumar

My Dead Love

Rating: 5.0


Sitting beside her with bloods all over;
Holding her close for a little while.
She's so beautiful with her face half covered;
I still can see the lovely way she smile.

My body is shivering with the touch of that cold breeze;
This night is freezing and everything's gone seize.
Time has come to free myself too;
I hold up my gun and say I love you.

Oh why did you make me do this?
We could have reach the love destination.
I'm sure I'll miss that soul kiss
But I have to do this for the salvation.

The sound fill the night as I pull the trigger
Bullet in my head, I know she felt the same.
I really don't know whether I'm a lover or a sinner
But this is true that we've played the love game.

Oh Unfaithful why did you touch my love?
You are the one who send us above.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 29 January 2009

Oh, my God...a very sad poem... very convincing... words so heart-squeezing.... a poem of great love......like Romeo and Juliet... Can i say no, dont do it...? 10++++++

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