My Child Poem by shabnam banu

My Child

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she is evana
my lovely evana, our eva-
her smile brings all''
beguile sadness...
she combines our families..
she is from heaven..
she is my innocent baby..
the world greets her...
i wish her not to go far.

Thursday, July 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: baby,children
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
evana is my child of seven months
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 07 July 2016

Lovely depiction of the essence of doting parent's love ❤ and appreciation of God's given bundle of pure joy - a child. Beautiful poem well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Shabnam.

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Shabnam Banu 10 July 2016

thank you so much for your so sweet and thoughtful comment.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2016

she is from heaven.. she is my innocent baby.. seeing your child as a gift of 'God and hugging it with intense love....... you are a great loving person.....and poetess. thank you. tony

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Shabnam Banu 10 July 2016

thank you very much for your comment'''''.... you are my maiden poet to comment on my maiden poem........i am lucy with you.

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