My Chest Is Heavy Poem by Shaun Rudie

My Chest Is Heavy

Rating: 4.5


My chest is heavy,
I think from anxiety or a panic attack
Really don’t like either of those words
- I like less the pressure on my chest
Something heavy sits there,
as it sits on my thoughts - which I like even less
I think if I lift my thoughts, my chest will be lighter
But what do I know…
And besides…who can lift that much weight?

Sunday, April 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: anxiety,humanity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 April 2015

I visualize depression raring its ugly head and well depicted in the poem. A nice piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely expressed. Under the circumstance the solution is to learn to take things and situations in stride. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Kelly Kurt 19 April 2015

Thoughts can weigh a ton. Lifting the negative ones can lighten your mood and your chest. Thanks for sharing, Shaun

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