My Car Accident Poem by millie st.claire

My Car Accident

Rating: 5.0


Driving on a cold winter night,
drove with tears drowning my sight.
Didnt know where to turn
Drove into a ditch and felt a burn.

Lights blinding me in my eyes,
You could see the fears i tried to disguise.
I never thought i would make it out alive,
but God was there to help me strive.

So many thoughts going through my brain
I loved you once, but not again.
If i didnt get out of the car soon
I wouldnt live to see the shiny moon.

I was hospitalized for 2 weeks, in a coma for one of those weeks.
You never would have none, because you didnt ask,
While you forgot my name,
I forgot how much i cared about you.

But while in the hospital, i was thinking about dying,
I was thinking about you, and how you forgot everything you shared,
i got in a real car accident, but in the end, the only accident i got in, was letting you in to my heart and life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 23 December 2008

i heard bout your car accident, i hope your ok. i love this poem. i have my lisceance now, i dont know if you knew that or not. alot has happened and ive been wondering lately if i were to get into a car accident, would my ex even care. i honestly doubt he would. i think that itd be like this poem. great job though. i hope youre ok. =)

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Jay Boyd 11 December 2008

nice poem. very emotional and deep

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We're going to get through it Millie! ! ! ...Beautiful write! ! <33 Payyton

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Joseph Poewhit 01 December 2008

Hard shot of reality brings out truths

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Min Sia 01 December 2008

So sad..but revealing..the realization..the opening of one's mind... Great concept..Words flowing through...Fine imagery..very captivating. Great poem!

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