Liar! ! ! Poem by millie st.claire

Liar! ! !

Rating: 5.0


You said I
was your everything
You said I...
was the one
You played me
like a radio
You used to love that I...
had no shame
Put my pain into words
hold my hand to the flame

Tell me you love me like a star
Tell me you want me wherever you are
Tell me you'll breathe me till your last breath
Liar liar.

Bit by bit
I feel my draft; just sit back
and watch it burn
Hold your eyes to my veins
Call out, call out my name

Tell me you love me like a star
Tell me you want me wherever you are
Tell me you'll breath me till your last breath
Liar liar.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I love you where ever you are.......nice..... <3Payy

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Javier Falcon 20 July 2008

That is gorgeous, the repetition really impacts the writing, love it, good write...

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May Namoc 20 July 2008

awesome poem millie. i like ur use of words! ahaha, faves!

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Surya . 15 May 2009

expression of emotion rightly brought out.nice.posted 10 surya

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~ Jon London ~ 30 July 2008

Millie, very strong piece of writing....true emotion...lies are the words of the devils mail..........great piece Millie, keep expressing warmest regards Jon

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Serenity Prayer 29 July 2008

great poem. excellent job.

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Sabrina Helphrey 20 July 2008

u have good structure throughout the poem and i love your word choice great poem keep up the good work- Sabrina

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Rema Prasanna 20 July 2008

Effectively penned, a real feeling it generates.. liar is a liar..convincing.. good write.. Rema

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