My Bride To Be Poem by James Mwenda

My Bride To Be

Rating: 5.0


She looked charming
She talked with lots of charisma
She is a pillar any man would want
She is lovely to indulge in many topical issues

Her natural beauty has attracted me
I want her to be the mother of my children
I pray that she accepts me
For i am ready to slip the ring on her finger

I called her honey on our first date
She got mad at me
She reminded me that she has a name
And i have to address her by her names

My lovely flower
Its not soon to tell the world
That i have lovely feelings for you
And that I love you

I will ask for a hand in marriage
Through the right channel
I will have no short cuts
That will ruin this newly found love

Saturday, November 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My dedication to my beautiful lady
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Kerubo 05 November 2016

This is a good piece James, she must be a lovely one.

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Karen Kerubo 19 December 2016

Thanks James the dance is still on

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James Mwenda 29 December 2016

Amen

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Aisha Masha 18 December 2016

Go ahead and put the ring on her finger. You are just about to start a new life. God be on your side.

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James Mwenda 29 December 2016

Thanks

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Collins Waswa 06 November 2016

This is twosome bro...starting written poetry and starting with it crowning a newly found soulmate. I wish you blessings in both.

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Earnest Gatuma 06 November 2016

Hmmm and I wish you a happy life ever after with your wife to be...Great work brother, I love the genuineness created in your poem.

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James Mwenda 06 November 2016

Thanks Earnest optimism optimism

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Rose Kanana 05 November 2016

I like, i like -this is an awesome first James. I look forward to reading and cheering you till you 'slip' the ring. A 10 from me.

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James Mwenda 06 November 2016

Thanks Rose, watch the space....

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