My Blade Glimmers Poem by Wicked Pissah

My Blade Glimmers

Rating: 3.5


my polished blade glimmers,
her pulse in the reflection,
the blue arteries roaring
beneath frost-white skin.

an efficient swipe,
dragging left to right,
opens the whiteness,
laced with brilliant red.

a cold whisper in her ear,
I love you, I tell her,
just as her knees
give out and the body
drops.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mason Maestro 19 July 2011

God this is quite cold. Quite drafty. Hope it's figurative in some sense or another. Again, it leaves me with questions...

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